The textures are pretty cool! I think the effect might work a bit better if the stars were larger. Like the size of the poka-dots on the Mario mushrooms. The only other thing that throws it off for me is the grass is too bright, and the fireworks aren't bright enough. Not sure you want to really make changes, but I think a few adjustments could make this work really well. You could even change the camera angle to worms eye view. Looking up at the shrooms towards the sky where the fireworks are. That's my critique for ya. .'D
ya it was just kinda a quick project to do that day cause i had the day off and wanted to force my self to do something in maya but thanks for the critique gives me stuff to think about for future little projects and your right the grass is way to bright ha ha
The textures are pretty cool! I think the effect might work a bit better if the stars were larger. Like the size of the poka-dots on the Mario mushrooms. The only other thing that throws it off for me is the grass is too bright, and the fireworks aren't bright enough. Not sure you want to really make changes, but I think a few adjustments could make this work really well. You could even change the camera angle to worms eye view. Looking up at the shrooms towards the sky where the fireworks are.
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ya it was just kinda a quick project to do that day cause i had the day off and wanted to force my self to do something in maya but thanks for the critique gives me stuff to think about for future little projects and your right the grass is way to bright ha ha
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